100 Stories- 100 Days – Short Story #11

100 Stories- 100 Days – Short Story #11
August 14, 2013 Miro Sevin Siegel



It’s so damn cold, and this forest seems to go on forever. This frozen wonderland, as some people might call it, is going to be the death of me, I know it. I’ve already lost all feeling in my left arm…

I’m writhing in pain; The frost as merciless as an assassin. The ice stings at my skin, and tears at my coat, letting in the bitter wind. It’s as if the cold has a mind of its own, as if I’m an intruder, and it’s casting me out of it’s domain.

Every time I take a breath, it blinds me; the heat from my lungs becoming a thick mist, impeding all vision. The ruthless, chilling air solidifies my eyes. I begin to cry uncontrollably, the tears instantly freezing, pinching my face with a sharp pressure.

I move forward, without aim, without purpose. I know I have no chance of survival.

I haven’t seen many animals, and the animals I have seen fled with an alarming pace, searching for cover. Were they running from me, or was it something else?

I keep shuffling forward. What else can I do? Sit down and die? I’m not ready to give up. Not yet, at least.

How did I even get here? I can’t remember anything before I arrived here… Was I brought here against my will, or was it my decision? Is this some cruel trick of fate?

My body begins to go unresponsive. I crumble, falling to the ground. This is it; My limbs refusing to answer me, there’s nothing I can do.

A thick, malevolent vapor surrounds me. Seeping into my mouth, my eyes, my ears. It invades my body, like an unwelcome guest invading your home.

My body slowly begins to evaporate with a startling numbness. The surreally settling in. I’m watching my body, my vessel, my home disappear into the mist.

I became one with the cold, flying through the wind with amazing agility.

Just remember, every time a chill goes down your spine, well, that’s me.

What is this? it’s part of the NEW PROJECT: 100 Stories- 100 Days – Send your suggestions for stories by submitting a title and genre and I’ll write it!

1 Comment

  1. Emy 9 years ago

    Oooooooh magnificent and poetic! And a bit romatic if you think of it. Or creepy. Or both. 😉

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